Pages Torn (working title): 10/100k (2 chapters complete)
Yay, I hit the 10k mark! Only 90 more to go. :D
This week's workshop exercises are:
To critique the use of dialogue tags and internal monologue in Hemingway's "Hill's Like White Elephants" vs "Mr and Mrs Elliott", and to rewrite my dialogue scene taking into account what I learn through that and the concrit I've received over at fm. So look out for those.