Themus (themus_revenge) wrote,
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Themus' Weekly Writerly Update #5



Update summary:
Pages Torn (working title):  10/100k (2 chapters complete)

Yay, I hit the 10k mark!  Only 90 more to go.  :D


This week's workshop exercises are:

To critique the use of dialogue tags and internal monologue in Hemingway's "Hill's Like White Elephants" vs "Mr and Mrs Elliott", and to rewrite my dialogue scene taking into account what I learn through that and the concrit I've received over at fm.  So look out for those.
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